This is the feedback i received from my peers both good points and bad, i will now act on this feedback to improve my initial ideas. This will hopefully strengthen my final product and get me a better grade overall. A few comments said my chosen genre was clear and strong and i know what i want to do and i want to know what i want my end product to look like which is good, however they also said i need to begin to talk about my ancillary tasks, i am going to act on this feedback land upload my ancillary tasks.
You need to have a capital I, please check and amend throughout your blog. You have taken on board feedback that was given to you by your peers.
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